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So I am not cross-posting this entry because someone who I know is very conservative will see it, and may possibly never read another one of my fanfics again. So. Tonight I started the fourth fic of NaNoWriMo. This fic will include some much needed closure for Victoria with Marcia Roba.
What I wasn't counting on it including was Victoria and Christien finally doing this full on make out session that got pretty damn hot and heavy. It bordered on soft porn, I would believe. O_O
I don't write scenes like this! Well, okay, no I did write one scene like that in the original draft of The Powers book #1, but this one actually went beyond even that!
But I did stick to my principles, and I probably will. Steamy make outs, yes. Sex before marriage? No. But I've held that belief for as long as i can remember. It had nothing to do with religious beliefs cause screw letting some old guy in a robe tell me what to believe in... but. (No offense to anyone on my list who are very religious. That's just how I feel).
I just really loved "watching" Christien and Victoria go that next step, and how careful and conscience of her Christien was. He was even hesitant to remove her bra after she said it was okay to do so. It was so sweet, and kind, and sensual...that's just really how their relationship is when it comes to the romance of it, though. On the surface, they're two best friends that fell completely in love with each other. But alone, there's this amazing passion between them, and it was incredible to finally bring that out. I've always wanted to, and never found a great opportunity to do so. Now I have, and it was random, but the Robas are KNOWN for being random.... this is just a more "mature" random, I guess.
Christien reached around her, and absently threw a shoe in Jonathan's general direction. ~I think not having brothers around for a while will definitely help us progress.~ He said. There was a smirk in his voice. And as soon as the door closed, he pulled away and smiled. “That's one way to get rid of him...”
Victoria could only in nod in agreement. She was having a difficult time finding her breath again. Whatever was about to happen between them, she was suddenly well aware of them being alone together in a room with the door closed, and his inviting bed. “W-well.....”
Christien smiled softly, and took her hand in his. “We don't have to do anytihng you're not ready for, Tori...” He said softly. His voice was deep, and rugged though. “I'll let you tell me where you want to go.”
Victoria nodded, quite intrigued with exactly where this was going. She let Christien gently guide her into the bed, and then watched as he got in himself. He pulled her close to him, and then they were locked into another passionate kiss. She pulled away after a minute remembering she was still wearing necklaces. Christien hastily helped her remove them, and set them on his nightstand, before pulling her down against his chest carefully. Dear Ra he's gotten so muscular... thank you, Espa.... At the thought of Espa, she froze. No, they couldn't do this. He'd made that very clear....
“Hey.... my brother isn't invited into this.” Christien said, barely taking his mouth away from hers. Then he was moving to her neck and her collar bone. She heard him groan in pleasure.
“Y-you know....I haven't made into the....oh god...” She was cut off mid complaint when he began lining kisses up along her neckline. She stretched out amore, giving him access to it when he chuckled as if he'd just won the lottery. ~You know all you're tasting is carnie crud.~
~No taste better, Little Lottie.~ Even his mental voice was husky now. This was very interesting. When he got down where he could no longer kiss her bare skin, he paused. “Are you okay...?” He asked quietly.
“Never better.” She said in a soft voice. Her breathing was quick and in gulps. “Where did you...?”
“Mostly instinct...” Christien said. He tugged lightly at her t-shirt, looking at her questioningly.
“What...? Oh!” Victoria paused only a moment before deciding to lose the shirt. “This is as far as I go, for now...” She told him.
“I'm okay with this.” He replied, before positioning himself on top of her without quite putting all his weight on her. Christien gently fingered her bra straps, sliding one down her arm and then the other. “You....are so beautiful...so beautiful.” He said in a quiet whisper as he leaned down to kiss her throat again. He reached under her, and Victoria felt the clasp of her bra pop open. He hesitated as if he was uncertain. ~Are you sure, Tori...?~
Victoria reached up, and caressed his cheek with one hand, and gently slid her bra off with the other. ~Never more certain.... I know you will remember my limits. I trust you.~ She said. Speaking aloud was just not an option as she was completely breathless from the way he speak, and moved, and touched her. Then she rested, completely at Christien's mercy.
I am excited to see what happens next! This was just So much fun!
Trivia: Nora was named after Nick and Norah's Infinite Playlist
What I wasn't counting on it including was Victoria and Christien finally doing this full on make out session that got pretty damn hot and heavy. It bordered on soft porn, I would believe. O_O
I don't write scenes like this! Well, okay, no I did write one scene like that in the original draft of The Powers book #1, but this one actually went beyond even that!
But I did stick to my principles, and I probably will. Steamy make outs, yes. Sex before marriage? No. But I've held that belief for as long as i can remember. It had nothing to do with religious beliefs cause screw letting some old guy in a robe tell me what to believe in... but. (No offense to anyone on my list who are very religious. That's just how I feel).
I just really loved "watching" Christien and Victoria go that next step, and how careful and conscience of her Christien was. He was even hesitant to remove her bra after she said it was okay to do so. It was so sweet, and kind, and sensual...that's just really how their relationship is when it comes to the romance of it, though. On the surface, they're two best friends that fell completely in love with each other. But alone, there's this amazing passion between them, and it was incredible to finally bring that out. I've always wanted to, and never found a great opportunity to do so. Now I have, and it was random, but the Robas are KNOWN for being random.... this is just a more "mature" random, I guess.
Christien reached around her, and absently threw a shoe in Jonathan's general direction. ~I think not having brothers around for a while will definitely help us progress.~ He said. There was a smirk in his voice. And as soon as the door closed, he pulled away and smiled. “That's one way to get rid of him...”
Victoria could only in nod in agreement. She was having a difficult time finding her breath again. Whatever was about to happen between them, she was suddenly well aware of them being alone together in a room with the door closed, and his inviting bed. “W-well.....”
Christien smiled softly, and took her hand in his. “We don't have to do anytihng you're not ready for, Tori...” He said softly. His voice was deep, and rugged though. “I'll let you tell me where you want to go.”
Victoria nodded, quite intrigued with exactly where this was going. She let Christien gently guide her into the bed, and then watched as he got in himself. He pulled her close to him, and then they were locked into another passionate kiss. She pulled away after a minute remembering she was still wearing necklaces. Christien hastily helped her remove them, and set them on his nightstand, before pulling her down against his chest carefully. Dear Ra he's gotten so muscular... thank you, Espa.... At the thought of Espa, she froze. No, they couldn't do this. He'd made that very clear....
“Hey.... my brother isn't invited into this.” Christien said, barely taking his mouth away from hers. Then he was moving to her neck and her collar bone. She heard him groan in pleasure.
“Y-you know....I haven't made into the....oh god...” She was cut off mid complaint when he began lining kisses up along her neckline. She stretched out amore, giving him access to it when he chuckled as if he'd just won the lottery. ~You know all you're tasting is carnie crud.~
~No taste better, Little Lottie.~ Even his mental voice was husky now. This was very interesting. When he got down where he could no longer kiss her bare skin, he paused. “Are you okay...?” He asked quietly.
“Never better.” She said in a soft voice. Her breathing was quick and in gulps. “Where did you...?”
“Mostly instinct...” Christien said. He tugged lightly at her t-shirt, looking at her questioningly.
“What...? Oh!” Victoria paused only a moment before deciding to lose the shirt. “This is as far as I go, for now...” She told him.
“I'm okay with this.” He replied, before positioning himself on top of her without quite putting all his weight on her. Christien gently fingered her bra straps, sliding one down her arm and then the other. “You....are so beautiful...so beautiful.” He said in a quiet whisper as he leaned down to kiss her throat again. He reached under her, and Victoria felt the clasp of her bra pop open. He hesitated as if he was uncertain. ~Are you sure, Tori...?~
Victoria reached up, and caressed his cheek with one hand, and gently slid her bra off with the other. ~Never more certain.... I know you will remember my limits. I trust you.~ She said. Speaking aloud was just not an option as she was completely breathless from the way he speak, and moved, and touched her. Then she rested, completely at Christien's mercy.
I am excited to see what happens next! This was just So much fun!
Trivia: Nora was named after Nick and Norah's Infinite Playlist
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